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Main >> Halloween 2007 Story Contest >> Brotherly Love

Brotherly Love
Author: nico
 
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 Reviews
Professor - 16 March 2009
This is one of the finest stories ever posted on the archive. I am only sorry I didn't find it sooner. Please keep writing, you are needed.
nico - 29 October 2007
Thanks for the kind words, everyone! I'm very glad to see my story so well received. You won't have to wait too long for something new - if there's a Thanksgiving contest this year, I'll be sure to enter something. Thanks again!
TabulaRasa - 27 October 2007
I greatly enjoyed the story. It's nice to see a happy ending, and with some dark moments to get there, too. I agree with Seb that the narration could use a bit of work, but that just means I'll look forward to your next story all the more.
katiekat - 27 October 2007
katiekat - 27 October 2007
i loved this story :) nico i hope u write more stories here. -heather
Thespispunk88 - 26 October 2007
Very Cute story you've got here. It also has a nice story arc and is amazingly finished. I loved it.
Sebtomato - 25 October 2007
A good effort, nice to see a big story for the contest. However (since this *is* a contest), I didn't find the brother's relationship believable, and the narration was rather clumsy.
Misha1 - 25 October 2007
Cool story...I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work!
4ever5 - 25 October 2007
I love this story...very well written, and I missed male ar. There wasn't a lot for a looong time, and I appreciate this story.
4ever5 - 25 October 2007
whats sumner said.
kARth - 25 October 2007
Aww, I love happy endings. Great work, nico. I'm glad you finally decided to submit something--you have a knack for it, and I do hope to see more in the future.
maniac78 - 25 October 2007
Definitely a treat for Halloween. Great job, Nico. I hope to see more from you in the future.
AutoXgirl - 24 October 2007
Nice build up. Your story is well-written and very easy on the eyes to read. Good job!
AutoXgirl - 24 October 2007
Very good chapter. The dialogue was believable and the writing appeared flawless. Yoou are an accomplished writer, nico. Great job!
AutoXgirl - 24 October 2007
It's refreshing to read a story where lessons are learned and unbridled revenge is suppressed. It's a pleasure to read this story.
AutoXgirl - 24 October 2007
nico, I enjoyed your story very much. It was well-written and it brought a smile to my face. Good job!
sumner - 24 October 2007
Finally. A well-executed, correctly punctuated, exceedingly entertaining story. Best I've read here in quite some time. Thanks for proving it can still be done.



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