| Was it ever fully explained whether the old lady at the shop and the lady who ends up becoming Jen's mother are the same lady? I don't think it was. But if it wasn't, that's really the only thing this story is missing. Sure, it may have been nice for Jen's friends to pop up again and comment on her return to babyhood; however, it was unnecessary given the order of the story's events. What you do have fits together well, is organized, well-thought-out, and fun to read. Neither too long, nor too short. And involves magical baby items, to boot. Smashing job. =D |
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