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New submission to Comics 3 Months ago Karma: 6  
I had already posted this in my deviantART gallery at https://www.deviantart.com/fmtfluver/gallery/

Had this in the back of my head for a long time, finally had the money to pay for it to be commissioned. The art is from the Brazilian artists at Cosmotrama studios, which has a Facebook page here www.facebook.com/Cosmotrama.st… and the coloring was done by pikotime pikotime who can be reached at This e-mail address is being protected from spam bots, you need JavaScript enabled to view it

I could not have dialogue added to the art, so the _script_ for each page is below. Please note that neither I nor any of the artists or colorists claim ownership of any of the characters depicted in this art. I have kept things on a PG level, though there is a serious twist in this story.

Also, for anyone who is not just into AR, but enjoys all transformations, you might want to visit the blog I recently began at https://wordpress.com/posts/transformationstation.blog

Here is the dialogue for the art:

PAGE ONE, PANEL ONE: Dr. Ann Possible is being feted as "Brain Surgeon of the Year." The rest of the Possible family is there. Note the serving platter on the table.


PAGE ONE, PANEL TWO:

DOCTOR DRAKKEN: I've always said you're not "all that," Kim Possible! This ray will show you what your ARE!


PAGE ONE, PANEL THREE:

KIM: No, it will show you what Shego is!


PAGE ONE, PANEL FOUR:

SOUND EFFECT: ZAP!

SHEGO: Noooowwaaahhh!!!


PAGE TWO, PANEL ONE:

SOUND EFFECT: Kick!


PAGE TWO, PANEL TWO:

SOUND EFFECTS: K_link_!


PAGE TWO, PANEL THREE:

SOUND EFFECT: ZAP!

DWEEBS: Mom!


PAGE THREE, PANEL ONE:

KIM: Aww, are you trying to zap me? Those sparks are all you can make?

JAMES: Ann, what are we going to do?


PAGE THREE, PANEL TWO:

DOCTOR DRAKKEN : Kim Possible, I want Shego back as much as you want your mother. I promise no villainy while I work on this.

DOCTOR DRAKKEN (Second balloon): I think we can reverse the regression. I can create an antidote and you can supply the nutrients.

KIM: Me?!


PAGE THREE, PANEL THREE:

DOCTOR DRAKKEN: This will stimulate production of milk in you, and the antidote will combine with it. Just nurse your mother and --

KIM: Nurse!? My own mother!?

DOCTOR DRAKKEN: Yes. Your DNA will help the cure.

DOCTOR DRAKKEN: We should get some results testing with Shego, though the DNA difference will slow things up.


PAGE THREE, PANEL FOUR:

KIM: It’s working! I can feel her growing, gaining wei --


PAGE THREE PANEL FIVE:

KIM: YE-OWW!


PAGE THREE, PANEL SIX:

KIM: You brat! I hope you stay a baby forever!



PAGE FOUR, PANEL ONE:

KIM: This is weird, like something dreamed up by a REALLY sick writer, but --


PAGE FOUR, PANEL TWO:

KIM: Wait! It's working.


PAGE FOUR, PANEL THREE:

KIM: Mom's getting bigger! Older! She's --


PAGE FOUR, PANEL FOUR:

KIM: She's MY age! But I think I'm out of milk!

ANN: That's all right, Kim. We can continue later.

DR. DRAKKEN: Shego, no! That ray gun is damaged! It's unstable! It could --


PAGE FOUR, PANEL FIVE:

DR. DRAKKEN (Off-panel): -- backfire.

SOUND EFFECT: BOOM!


PAGE THREE, PANEL SIX: Shego, now a newborn, sits by the smoldering husk of the ray gun.


PAGE THREE, PANEL SEVEN:

TEENAGE ANN: I’m sure the nuns will care for Shego. Oh, and, Kim, your milk was delicious!

KIM: Mom! EEW!!
 
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