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Main >> Holiday 2006 Story Contest >> A letter to Santa

A letter to Santa
Author: Steven
 
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maniacaldude - 18 September 2011
This was a great story, although I feel like it was a little disappointing. I loved the ending, but do you think you could have done alternate endings or something? We have this one where both girls are regressed into Anna's uterus, but do you think there are some other paths it could have gone? Like maybe one ending where Eva doesn't steal the candy cane and lick it until she becomes a newborn and it just focuses on the relationship with Susan and Eva, or another where she does regress into a newborn, but isn't regressed back into Anna's belly. I dunno. Either way, adorable story. I love the concept of a mother regressing to infancy and the child bonding with her. So yeah, aside from a few things that I feel could've been done differe
arfan5890 - 23 July 2007
This is a great story and I hope to read more of your great stories in the near future.



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